Ailam Remard

Hello Phaedra! I liked this, but I'm still wondering if this is about the Salem Witch Trials or not, is it? Another part of me is wondering if it was ...

Hi Sureal! I think you should write this into a story! It sounds really good. No grammar mistakes, at least that I see, you did awesome on that part. *Gives ...

Bravo! Hehe, I like to say that. It reminds me of the Pantom of the Opera. I really liked this, it reminded me of the self centered popular girl who ...

I love To Kill and Mockingbird. It's my favorite book! Atticus Finch is my hero, and Scout is who I wanna be like. I didn't want it to end! I ...

Olivia and Peyton, First off let me note a few mistakes and other stuff I saw. -“Do you have enough cloths? What about money?”- Clothes is spelt wrong. Hehe. -“So… ...

QUOTE: To try take the safest way. END QUOTE This should be more like "Try to take the safest way" or "To try to take the safest way" or "You/I ...

QUOTE: You get ahead three steps ahead of me. END QUOTE Take out the extra ahead. So instead of "You get ahead three steps ahaed of me" it should be ...

Yes, I agree, poems don't have to rhyme and when you try and make them rhyme, it just sounds very forced. Also the last line "Happy." I didn't get it. ...

Still, your story makes me depressed! It's sorta, um, I can't explain, you know? Not that it's horrible! It's WONDERFUL for people who like to read this kind of stuff. ...

Lol. When I saw the title "It's time" I thought it was about someone going into labour. Sorry but OMG I feel really stupid. I liked it though. :D.

Cute! I LOVED it. I have to admit I did think "What the F?" when he started to lick the girls face. Lol. I liked how it was a dream. ...

I think this perfectly illustrates the feelings and thoughts of a depressed and desperate girl. Maybe if you could add more to the end saying how she changed from that ...

This was really really good. Even though the holding hands part was probably meant for lovers, it captured me in a different way. See, I own (ok my family) a ...

I just have to say to Joeducktape that the vomitting part was cool. And to Sureal, ur writing is so discriptive! I try so hard to be discriptive but it ...